On a Thursday, the idea was pitched to Annabelle our teacher who spotted out our flaws. Which were:
- Overall concept
-Time in which to portray all this
Disappointed as the girls were, another idea had come to light, that the sequence would have a concept that a girl is looking for a bracelet with a series of flashbacks/cutaways which use the bracelet. However, on the following Monday we were told that we would be unable to use that idea because it uses a flashback which could have proven quite tacky and ineffective.
|The unclear storyboard|
|We even whipped out the A3 - sad we had to change it :(|
|Bye-Bye Mr. A3!|